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:iconyergany:
Firstly, I would like to say that this is a very confusing shot and that's one of the reasons why I like it and, at the same time, it bothers me. The different elements framed make this a vivid photo. It is colourful, beautiful and you can feel nature breathing. However, the foreground hurts the image. It is not well focused (or sharp) and it is not blurry and this "in the middle" focusing is what makes it negatively confusing because you can barely make them apart.

I would suggest either taking the foreground out of focus to blend with the background (which would create an amazing shot) or sharpening and separating it from the background. Another thing I would recommend is vignetting, just to limit the eye movement a bit when looking at the photo.

Lastly, I find this photograph to be really good and risky. We see a lot of plant photos, but despite the minor flaws, this one stands out. It has something unique to it, which is the most important. A very good job! :)
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thanks for the crit. :aww:

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you're welcome! :)

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